storytelling / communication
Show, Don’t Tell: Make People Care
Austin explains how to turn abstract claims into scenes an audience can picture. Examples include a lecture, a struggling student, a product obstacle, and a call from the bank, alongside his actual presentation and publishing receipts.
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0:00So I've got millions of views across TikTok Instagram and YouTube I've got millions of views across written platforms
0:05like my blog on Medium I've had guest lectures at Harvard University I've done
0:11presentations at Princeton University And this one trick will help you stand out when you're giving
0:17your presentations and either trying to grow on social media or grow in your career So if you're a
0:23young professional and you're thinking to yourself how do I give presentations that people give a damn about How do I
0:29present information in such a way that people care Stop and watch this video
0:34because the trick is really easy It's literally just three words The three words
0:40are show don't tell Let me explain Which sentence elicits a better
0:46emotional response Cindy cried all day long
0:52Or the tears streamed down Cindy's face and soaked her notebook
0:58as she couldn't stop crying for the sixth consecutive hour
1:03Now I am not a writing or English expert so I'm sure I can workshop that a little bit but you
1:09get the point The second sentence elicits imagery It shows you
1:15what's going on rather than just boringly tells you Good narratives and good presentations
1:21do the same thing You don't want to say my product is the best thing since sliced bread
1:27You want to say look at the problem my product is solving to fix the needs that
1:33you knew you've had for years If you're an entrepreneur you don't want to say I spent 5
1:39000 this month on this that and the third You want to say I woke up in a frantic at 5 a m My bank was calling
1:44me in a different time zone They were concerned that my account was about to be overdrafted
1:515 000 was what the lady on the phone kept saying to me Show don't tell
1:57Elicit imagery Paint a picture in their head that makes the person listening feel some sort of emotion
2:03And I promise you all your presentations all your social media posts everything will be just so much
2:09better and more interesting
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